Unfortunately, I can't just walk out. I'm trying to be someone who lives by his commitments, and I committed myself to doing this show. That means I do it, then tell them what I think and leave.
I would like to take you up on the offer of help, but I would need more than what you suggested - more than to make people cry. Before it ever gets as far as BUSMS, I want the proofreader in tears at the sheer level of vitriloic malice eminating from the page and threatening to overflow and engulf the room, shutting off all light and intrinsically painting the walls black.
I want the intended recipients eyes to bleed. I want them to be torn between gouging their eyes out in attempts to get away from it, and being unable to tear themselves away from the next passage - it holding them like velvet handcuffs lined with razor wire.
I imagine it'll just end up being a slightly tetchy resignation letter, but I can but fantasize.
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Date: 2005-12-11 12:13 am (UTC)I would like to take you up on the offer of help, but I would need more than what you suggested - more than to make people cry. Before it ever gets as far as BUSMS, I want the proofreader in tears at the sheer level of vitriloic malice eminating from the page and threatening to overflow and engulf the room, shutting off all light and intrinsically painting the walls black.
I want the intended recipients eyes to bleed. I want them to be torn between gouging their eyes out in attempts to get away from it, and being unable to tear themselves away from the next passage - it holding them like velvet handcuffs lined with razor wire.
I imagine it'll just end up being a slightly tetchy resignation letter, but I can but fantasize.